ur not shit, thats for sure.
I personally really lyke ur storylines...and ur dialog is very good.
The only thing I can suggest is you make the sprites move as smoothly as possible...and don't use anything of proxicides!!! (LOL)
Do your own thang, be original.
And I promise you will be THA SHIT
azn-sk8er-dude
I'm sorry dude but you need more leverage. You need to be at least better than me, and I'm pretty good. It seems that you are getting high scores because of your story and not your animation skills. To me it's the opposite. So if you find a way to mesh these two together, I'm pretty sure you'll get some popularity.
mortis5000
Thanks for your opinion it helped